R040417A Deployed to Test Readers

I got a number of important edits from Valeria Maier today and wanted to fix those before anyone else started reading it.

I'm up to page 387 when formatted for printing. I either have to finish the book in 13 pages or I have to pay the Graphic Artist to add width to the spine graphic to cover the additional thickness.

I'd hoped to put more of a cliff-hanger in the book to build some interest for the book 2 release "Rage of Harmony".

I had hoped to have the big conflict with the TCDF Taskforce and force the issue of allegiance for the Terran crew members of Celestia, prior to the end.

What do you think? Can I tie this up in 13 pages?